Revision Department
Cutting, restructuring, and the difference between fixing a sentence and fixing a chapter.
10 articles
Articles in Revision Department
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Cutting 10,000 Words Without Losing the Story
Length is not the same as substance. A book can become smaller while its story becomes easier to see.
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The Beautiful Sentence That Belongs in the Wrong Book
A sentence can be excellent and still damage the book around it.
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The Difference Between Fixing a Sentence and Fixing a Chapter
A sentence problem can often be solved in place. A chapter problem may require changing what the chapter is for.
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The Last Version Before the Next Version
A manuscript version can be complete, coherent, and temporary at the same time.
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The Scene That Works and Still Has to Go
A scene can succeed on its own and still weaken the book by repeating, delaying, or redirecting the story.
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What Does This Scene Change?
A scene is not justified by good dialogue, atmosphere, or information alone. It needs to alter what the story can do next.
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What Editors Mean When They Say the Middle Is Sagging
A slow middle is rarely solved by adding random action. The problem is usually that consequences stop accumulating.
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When the Problem Isn’t the Prose
A page can resist improvement because the language is being asked to solve a decision the story has not made.
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Why Revision Is Not Punctuation
Correcting commas can improve a page. It cannot give a scene a reason to exist.
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Why Writers Restore Paragraphs They Deleted Yesterday
Revision rarely moves in a clean direction. A paragraph can be wrong, removed, missed, restored, and changed before its real function becomes visible.
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